What is one idea, suggestion, or approach from a group member that improved your paragraph or changed the way you thought about the argument?

 Prompt Response: A group member suggested that instead of just explaining the situation that happened with the grandmother we should instead go more into depth about what experiences he was missing out on. This idea made the argument clearer, and better outlined our argument. We talked about how a we will never be able to experience once in a lifetime experiences with our dead loved ones like a wedding, graduation, etc. This change to our argument made our paragraph less repetitive and helped us not just state the obvious. 

Summary: Today in class we took notes, and surveyed our arguments to ensure that they had proper formal language.

Reflection: I use formal language in all of my academic writing. When I proactively practice using this language In my writing it will help me become a better and stronger writer.

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